They had devised the floor plan to take advantage of the sweeping views out front. Crumbling the old castle may be, but it caught the eye tantalizingly, when seen through the two picture windows placed either side of the chimney. Oddly, the fireplace, so necessary in the cold climate, had also been placed on the house’s front wall. It too could be the focal point when it was too dark or foggy to see outside.
With the fire lit, the house resembled an elderly gentleman smoking his pipe.
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23 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers – A home at last”
You would never know how crumbling it is from the looks of that view
Thanks E.W. – that is a very encouraging comment! I usually find it extremely difficult to stick to 100 words and part of participating in this challenge is to make my writing more concise. Perhaps it is working?
You would never know how crumbling it is from the looks of that view
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Haha! A castle is still incredibly atmospheric no matter the state it is in!
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Well done, you’ve created an extremely vivid picture with your words.
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Aw, thanks so much, Miriam. It took me a long time to think of the idea but then it came out in one go. No editing this time!
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Agreed! You made a drab, worn down ruin come to life and warm the hearth and heart. And in 93 words!
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Thanks E.W. – that is a very encouraging comment! I usually find it extremely difficult to stick to 100 words and part of participating in this challenge is to make my writing more concise. Perhaps it is working?
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Oh, brilliant….well done Corfe for the inspiration!!
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I was lost on the one. Given that we only have 100 words to create a mini story. So I do appreciate your compliment.
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Pleasure!
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Now that’s the kind of home I’d like, too. I love how it resembles an elderly gentlemen smoking a pipe.
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It sounds quite cosy. There is nothing like a warm fire on a cold night. Pity we don’t have the need for it here! Thanks for the visit.
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Dear Amanda,
There’s nothing like coming home to a cozy home. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks ever so much!!
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I wish these old buildings and ruins could tell us their stories.
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Wouldn’t that be amazing!
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Lovely image!
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Thanks so much, Dorothy.
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So vivid! Loved this!
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Much appreciated, Donna!
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It does paint a cozy picture! I love fireplaces.
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Same here!
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🙂
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I’d love to share it with a real estate agent. Wouldn’t that just be a lovely home?
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